Success Criteria:
I reread my writing.
I identify words I know are spelt incorrectly.
I attempt to correct misspelt words.
I add descriptive words to build a picture in my reader's head.
On Friday I planted a seed, it was flower seed a little brown seed, Other people did it too. I needed a seed and soil and a pot a little yoghurt pot. I will water it and give it some sun. I felt happy that I like it. It is going to grow to a big flower. I hope it grows to a flower.
Cameron: Kyuss you made your work even better by rereading it and you underlined your spelling tries that you didn't know. Next time use a highlighter to highlight your spelling tries.
ReplyDeleteWell done Kyuss! I love the fact that you identified your errors and corrected them. It's great to also see that when you are unsure of your spelling you clearly mark the words out to show that you need some clarification. Great work Kyuss!! I wonder how your little seed done? Did it grow into a big beautiful flower?
ReplyDeletexx Mum