Thursday, 13 February 2014

Kyuss' writing

We are learning how to improve our writing.
Success Criteria:
I reread my writing.
I identify words I know are spelt incorrectly.
I attempt to correct misspelt words.
I add descriptive words to build a picture in my reader's head.





On Friday I planted a seed, it was flower seed a little brown seed, Other people did it too. I needed a seed and soil and a pot a little yoghurt pot. I will water it and give it some sun. I felt happy that I like it. It is going to grow to a big flower. I hope it grows to a flower. 

Alex's writing

We are leaning how to improve our writing.
Success Criteria:
I reread my writing.
I identify words I know are spelt incorrectly.
I attempt to correct misspelt words.
I add descriptive words to build a picture in my reader's head.



Tuesday, 4 February 2014

Our Writing

Room 16 are fantastic writers and this year we want to share some of our writing with you. Please take time to comment on the writing displayed on this page.