Thursday, 16 October 2014

Ben's Descriptive Writing

WALHT build a picture in the reader's head.

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I can use adjectives.
I can use adverbs.
I can use precise nouns.
I can use similes.


This is an olden day Bullock team.

There are ten bullocks pulling a carriage. It has two small wheels at the front and two big wheels at the back, the carriage has brown curtains. The carriage is as big as an elephant.

The Bullocks are black and white. They are big, long, fat and chubby like a hippo.

There is a man with a brown hat making sure the bullocks don't go crazy.

There are steep, long, big mountains in the back ground.

In the olden days bullocks were used as transport.