Monday, 10 March 2014

Flynn's Writing

We are learning how to use better words in our writing.

Success Criteria:
I can use adjectives
I can use precise nouns
I can build a picture in the reader's head

I will try and eat at least 4 pieces of fruit each day like, juicy oranges, yummy kiwifruit, delicious watermelon and sweet plums.
The next thing I will do is eat more vegetables, I really like crunchy carrots and delightful brocoli. So they will be good for me. Lastly I want to try and get more exercise. I will do this by running down the hill and riding my bike.






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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 01:03

    Flynn I can see that you have used precise nouns like, oranges, watermelon, plums and you've also used adjectives to describe these for the reader. You have made your writing much more desciptive.

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  2. Kara19 March 2014 at 00:49

    Great writing Flynn I loved reading this. I will have to buy all those fruits and vegetables for yo to enjoy

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  3. Tina24 March 2014 at 22:49

    Hannah said: Flynn, your describing words make the fruit and vegetables sound yummy.

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