Thursday, 13 February 2014

Alex's writing

We are leaning how to improve our writing.
Success Criteria:
I reread my writing.
I identify words I know are spelt incorrectly.
I attempt to correct misspelt words.
I add descriptive words to build a picture in my reader's head.



3 comments:

  1. Alex I can see that you started to improve your writing. You must have reread your writing because you have highlighted your spelling attempt with highlighter. I can also see that you have attempted to correct your spelling using green pen.
    You are ready to use some descriptive words to build a picture in the reader's head.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Dale said: Alex you have highlighted the words that are wrong. Next time try and write describing words

    ReplyDelete
  3. Ben said: Alex you have used green pen to fix the word you spelt wrong. Next time you could ask the teacher or a buddy to help you spell the other words.

    ReplyDelete